Is this poem alrite Imot very good :S

Life SALIManjWe life as we know it all fun and games, but when you see all the deep betrayal and misery, there is darkness in the world that we doot see, we see what we have said, the things to see that the blind Everything around us theews, music and advertising on the bus, you forget what was said, "Life goes on, we are the generation change the world from aew foundation help support the weak and poor, by knowing just a simple act, we will just have to begin, changes mustot let the world fall apart rather than a distant heart like the rain in a forest, weeed to transfer the to another lively joy, like a brother, we see emotion in everyone and everything, even something as small as a diamond ring If you see beauty

That'sot bad. We am doing our own thing too, so We know how insecure you feel about your work.

This poem is alrite Imot very good: S